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Twilight Sparkle by Ayzuki Twilight Sparkle by Ayzuki
Sooo...I made a lot of mistakes while I was drawing this picture, especialy on her horn. Since I spent over 8 hours with it I decided to upload it. If someone can give me tips on improving, well, I'm all ears :)

All rights rightfully belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.

Edit: Okay, seems it was my low self-confidence again :/ Anyway, I was serious about improving. I can't ask my teachers in an IT school about drawing so only the dA community left.
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:iconmlpfan4everxd:
MLPfan4everXD Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U draw more better than me! :(
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AppleSBelle Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Love it, very expressionate.
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dingosnivysprint12 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Man, your style is amazing! :D
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666inflames666 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this kind of MLP drawning. Brilliant !
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KlarkKentThe3rd Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
WHY is this SO AWESOME?? Oops!
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AppleBeard Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is really cool! good job :)
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Leo-17-0-2 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
[link] :) I hope you like it.
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PoniesInHats Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
[link] I'm just going to leave this here. :D
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Peruserofpieces Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Might I ask how you are able to achieve such striking darks on your works like this? I notice a sharp difference between this and your older pencil works, and I was wondering--did you switch to a different type of pencil? It really makes a big difference for the better, and I would love to know how you do it. :-)

This is super-adorable, by the way. I love the pose, and the expression is perfect. ;-)
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Ayzuki Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
I think it only looks different because my scanner was configured differently. I'm using the same 2H, HB, 3+4B and sometimes 6B pencils from the beginning.
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Peruserofpieces Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Wow, I never would have thought the scanner could make that much of a difference. I might have to take a closer look at my own settings now. Thanks! :-)
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JumbledBee Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You do know that when you point out your "mistakes" it makes it easier for us to see the "mistakes"? Don't mention them and maybe we won't see them. When you post it think in your mind that it's a masterpiece that could rival Leonardo, then when someone critiques it act like it's horrible.
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megaphonnic Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautifuly executed drawing :), I've browsed through your gallery and may i say it's astounding! ^^, your work has a sort of simplicity about it, you dont add too much to your drawings and that's what makes them unique and good on the eyes : D, If you want Advice, all i'll say is have more self confidence, your work is a lot better than you think it is :)

Keep up the good work! /)
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golden-mane Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
i think its great
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Vulpessentia Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You sir have a good taste in twilight poses [link]
;)
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:iconq42011:
Q42011 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
All of these pencil drawings are awesome, and I love the eyes especially. I can't believe this is done in pencil!
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ChiantiArts Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool!
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Shadechibi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool is all I can say... :3
(I mean like... without going into detail on how cool it is. :P)
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ExtrahoVinco Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome! Twi is best pony :D
*looks in gallery*
THERES MORE!?!?!

In all seriousness though, what mistakes are you talking about? I see nothing wrong with this picture at all! Its very VERY well done :)
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harvestcheddar Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
She's so cute! I don't know what needs to be improved, because she looks perfect to me. :love:
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ElementsGuardian Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You silly girl. What mistakes?? She looks wonderful. Body is anatomically correct (shes sitting and her hind legs look very acurate) Foreleg positioning and drawing look very nice as well. Her eyes.... her eyes are just precious. She looks so cute with that facial expression, almost like shes derping. 9_6 :P As for the horn.. I dont see what mistake you're talking about. Her horn looks like one of the best i've seen so far. Not too long and skinny, not too short and fat. And the point, rounded just perfect. You nailed it!! Overall she looks really good. I like the messy style you did with her mane. Keep up the great work! I see a ton of potential here!!
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Jasmine5 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
She looks so cute Ayzuki! Espeically her mane!
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PunkRoctorok Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You don't know HOW adorable she looks. You draw very well. Goodjob :)
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lanternjoe Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Rapidly going mindlessly berserk Twilight is best Twilight.
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PercipientFish Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Artist
Oh my good, it's so adorable! So much detail! You are amazing, this is amazing, -gushgushgush-
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KuroiTsubasaTenshi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the issue with the horn is twofold:
1) The bangs take up too much space. They take up most of the volume, so the horn gets stuck looking a little flat, because that's the only way it can fit in. For a more realistic interpretation like this, I suggest parting the bangs around her horn a little more.

2) The shading is a bit off. As best I can tell, the light is coming from in front of Twi, but the horn is shaded as though the light is coming from the viewer. I think it could use more shadow on the side facing the back of her head and a bit less on the side facing the same direction as she's looking.

Aside from that, I would recommend giving some thought to getting rid of the part of the head that shows on the left of her left eye (expand the eye a bit to fill the space that will be empty). I used to draw it this way too and after swapping to the way I suggest, I found it looked far more natural.

Otherwise, you have an excellent grasp of anatomy and volume.
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Ayzuki Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
First of all, thank you for the input, I really appreciate it ( and thanks for the others too ).

1) Well, for me the only problem was that I made the shading way too dark on the horn, it looked better but also it was kinda weird 'cause of the difference. I tried to erase the whole thing but it's not easy to erase 6B pencil and it became a mess. I tried to fix it but i couldn't. Maybe I tried it in the wrong way.

2) I was thinking about the light source issue. I don't follow any kind of "rule" when I make the shading. I do it without thinking about how it should look in reality, without imagining one source around the character. You made me sure that this should be the next step, but it will take a while 'till I get used to it.
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HALOPONY3 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice very nice.
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SuneGem Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks perfect to me! :o

The only tip I can offer is the realisation that nearly every artist is there own worst critic (I know I am...). Since the artist is the one person who has to look at there work for hours on end, they and only they are the ones who stare at it long enough to spot the flaws, while the casual viewer doesn't see them at all and instead loves the picture for what it is. Try to look at your work through the prespective of the other viewers who see it fresh for the first time. Maybe then you can start to see the great quality in your work for yourself. That's my tip. :)
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ahumeniy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Honestly I tried very hard to find any flaws and I got nothin'

I'd love to see this in color though.
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Doctoroctagonapus21 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Clock is ticking
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yuyuchan4ever Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
This is delightful. No reason for low self-confidence with this kind of result.
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I-Liek-Bad-Fanart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Lovely.
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FilistataFears Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Very awesome!
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KingWaldo Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
How could you possibly improve this picture? I see nothing wrong with it. Good job, man!
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:iconkomatsuzaki-xingqi:
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish I could draw this well.
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AndersHedstrom Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow, just wow! No need for improvement here as far as I can see! :D
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Schreiter Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
This is incredibly well done. I love when people draw the characters, and they end up looking better than the show.
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DarkApostleMatt Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
I think it turned out great
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Daqulith Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I could never do that amazing...*sniff*
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Warped-Dragonfly Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Mistakes? What mistakes? :noes:
I think this came out perfectly!
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UnboundedAccusations Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Messy hair Twilight is cutest Twilight <3
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GeoNine Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've got nothing. Love how you made her mane and tail look!
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kolekelley2 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
I Dont Think You Need Any Edits.
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PiplupSTARSCommander Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I Love Twilight She Is Sooooo Cute Lokking Like That I Just Wanna Cuddle Her!<<<<3333333
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trolled-hard Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Love it :D
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Algirduza Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
OH MAI GAWD SO ADORABLE!
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naomicb Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Well, if you want to improve, the only thing I can say is that the right arm (or hoof? lol) looks slightly detached) It's not really all that noticable, just something I noticed! Feel free to check out my gallery and help me improve too!
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meisakii Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
are you kidding me this is amazing! this would take me like my whole life to draw! INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!! :icontwilightlaplz:
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